“That sentence is too casual. It’s not emotional enough”
Now you have a direction.
Be less casual and be more emotive.
You don’t have that with a blank page.
You can’t critique a blank page.
As long as the page is blank you can’t go anywhere.
As soon as it’s on the page, you can start to improve it. To trim the excess fat and refine.
So write anything to get started. Write the worst sentence ever and go from there.
Thomas Duggan 